Thursday, May 26, 2022

Life

 So this is not a review. It's sort of a mock review. I wrote a poem. This is meant to be funny, so I hope it is.

If there were a creator,
I really must confess, 

I'd want to ask them why they
created this whole mess.

The plotline's convoluted.
I mean seriously, what the hell?

It's hard enough to follow one
but billions more as well?

And what is with these characters?
cause most of them are tropes.

When a good one comes along they're
soon killed off, so don't get up your hopes.

There is a touch more violence
than the darkest fiction shows

I wouldn't see more murders looking
at ten thousand crows.

Yes, it tugged at my emotions
although I can't say why.

It really had me going
made me laugh, then made me cry.

I have to say the setting
is what I like the best.

The world building's excellent
it really warms my chest.

I thought I'd give it one star
it's not my favorite piece.

But if they just reworked it,
could be a masterpiece.

No comments:

Post a Comment